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 Let me introduce myself...
 
-Hi! I'm [Ayo](http://ayoayco.com), a Software Engineer by profession who also occasionally *delves* into some art, music, and literature.
+Hi! I'm [Ayo](http://ayoayco.com), a Software Engineer by profession who occasionally *delves* into some art, music, and literature.
 
-I live in the Philippines with my wife, Jen, and our little boy, Kahel. I work remotely so I do not have to physically be at the office most of the time... meaning, I have more time to go travel around with the fam to take pictures, eat local delicacies, and make lots of fun memories.
+I live in the Philippines with my wife, Jen, and our little boy, Kahel... with whom I often go travel around to take pictures, eat local delicacies, and make lots of fun memories. I work remotely so I don't really have to be physically at the office most of the time... meaning, I have more time to spend with the fam!
 
 That's also why I think I can start blogging *again*. Let's talk more about the pros and cons of Remote Work sometime. :)
 
-Here, I write notes on technology and life as I experience them hoping to help, if not inspire, others to live more efficient and happier lives. If you want to learn more about the website, you can go read [the first post ever!!](/hello-world)
+Here, I write my *notes on technology and life...* hoping to help, if not inspire, others to live more efficient and happier lives. If you want to learn more about the website, you can go read [the first post ever!!!](/hello-world)
 
 I'm so glad you came by. Who knows? You just might enjoy reading some posts, right? :)