diff --git a/_drafts/2023-05-22-holding-off-rewrite.md b/_drafts/2023-05-22-holding-off-rewrite.md
index f7de926..a96f1db 100644
--- a/_drafts/2023-05-22-holding-off-rewrite.md
+++ b/_drafts/2023-05-22-holding-off-rewrite.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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-title: "Holding Off this Blog's Rewrite to Focus on Content"
+title: "Seriously Holding Off this Blog's Rewrite to Focus on Content"
 permalink: /holding-off-rewrite/
-description: "Have you heard the joke about the web developer who also has a blog? I'm that web developer."
+description: "Have you ever heard the joke about the web developer who also has a blog? I'm that web developer."
 category: projects
 ---