diff --git a/src/pages/about.astro b/src/pages/about.astro
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@@ -8,8 +8,9 @@ import Footer from '../components/Footer.astro'
     <h1>Ayo Ayco</h1>
     <p>ᜈᜄ᜔ᜋᜓᜎ ᜐ ᜉᜒᜇ̢̟ᜎᜐ᜔ ᜅ᜔ ᜐᜒᜎᜅᜈᜈ᜔</p>
     <p>
-      Frontend guy who likes server adventures, coding, and linux. Passionate
-      about the indieweb, digital sovereignty, and kindness.
+      Technical engineering leader experienced in web development, software
+      architecture, and community building. Passionate about the indieweb,
+      digital sovereignty, and kindness.
     </p>
     <p>
       I am an engineering manager at <a href="https://ing.com">ING</a> and a certified
@@ -18,7 +19,6 @@ import Footer from '../components/Footer.astro'
         target="_blank">isaqb.org</a
       >.
     </p>
-
     <p>
       In my spare time, I find it fun building <a href="/showcase">projects</a>,
       running self-hosted services at <a href="https://ayo.run">ayo.run</a>, and
@@ -29,14 +29,12 @@ import Footer from '../components/Footer.astro'
         href="https://m.webtoo.ls/@vitest">vitest's fedi presence</a
       >.
     </p>
-
     <p>
       I've volunteered much of my early years into leadership trainings,
       teaching & leading groups of students, planting a church, and facilitating
-      focus group discussions with entrepreneurial founders, where I learned a
-      lot about the power of multi-generational & multi-cultural communities.
+      focus group discussions with entrepreneurial founders, where I learned the
+      power of multi-generational & multi-cultural communities.
     </p>
-
     <h2 id="contact">Contact info</h2>
     <ul>
       <li>✉️ Email: <a href="mailto:ayo@ayco.io">ayo@ayco.io</a></li>