diff --git a/src/pages/about.astro b/src/pages/about.astro
index f3e1285..8101bbf 100644
--- a/src/pages/about.astro
+++ b/src/pages/about.astro
@@ -20,12 +20,10 @@ import Footer from '../components/Footer.astro'
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      In my spare time, when I have energy, I find it fun building <a
-        href="/showcase">hobby projects</a
-      >, running self-hosted services at <a href="https://ayo.run">ayo.run</a>,
-      and volunteering to <a
-        href="https://ayos.blog/why-fediverse/"
-        target="_blank">Fediverse</a
+      In my spare time, I find it fun building <a href="/showcase">projects</a>,
+      running self-hosted services at <a href="https://ayo.run">ayo.run</a>, and
+      volunteering to <a href="https://ayos.blog/why-fediverse/" target="_blank"
+        >Fediverse</a
       > projects like <a href="https://elk.zone">elk.zone</a>,
       <a href="https://m.webtoo.ls/public/local">webtoo.ls</a>, and <a
         href="https://m.webtoo.ls/@vitest">vitest's fedi presence</a
@@ -33,8 +31,8 @@ import Footer from '../components/Footer.astro'
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      In a previous life, I've volunteered much of my weekends into teaching
-      kids, leading groups of students, planting a church, and facilitating
+      I've volunteered much of my early years into leadership trainings,
+      teaching & leading groups of students, planting a church, and facilitating
       focus group discussions with entrepreneurial founders, where I learned a
       lot about the power of multi-generational & multi-cultural communities.
     </p>